Hold a Tight and Bright Party for Your Writing
“Keep it tight” is solid advice for, well, life.
Specifically, it’s a good credo for writers (he wrote, considering ending the post there).
Verbosity is bad, especially when it comes to your brand (unless your brand is The Corpulent Society of Grandiloquent Wordsmiths).
It’s human nature to want to explain absolutely everything about your wonderful, awesome so-good-wait-until-you-hear-about-all-the-good-things-we-do brand.
Enthusiasm is great, but curb it before your website’s landing page looks like an encyclopedia entry or your ads look like short stories (unless that’s your goal, which McDonald’s did to great effect in 2012). ...